Week 3 Story: The Wolf
It was the fifth day without of meal for Wolf. At this point it was getting ridiculous. He had never struggled to catch his prey before, but ever since he was kicked out of his pack, life has just been a battle for survival. Sure, he wasn’t the best hunter, but he could always rely on his pack mates. Now he has no one. No home. And most importantly no food. Wolf managed to find a hollowed out log the other day that he has been taking shelter in. Tomorrow will be better he thought. Wolf’s stomach growled violently as he struggled to fall asleep.
He awoke late in the day. No worries, he hunts best at dusk. Wolf slowly got up and let out a big yawn. It was time to find a meal. He knew of a farmstead close by but never approached it in the past. The pack was terrified of that place. There were these mutated wolves that guarded the tasty meals on legs. Many of his friends have been lost to those creatures. Normally it would be a suicide mission going alone, but he was desperate.
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Wolf grinned as his mouth began to water, “Perfect.”
Original Story: Aesop - The Wolf and The Kid
Author's Note:
The original story started from the young goat's perspective. He was separated from his heard and just minding his own business when the wolf appeared from the trees. Before eating the goat, the wolf played him a tune. Before the wolf was able to eat the goat, the guard dogs heard the tune and chased the wolf away.
I decided to keep this story as is, but add a prequel to it from the wolf's point of view. The original story made the reader sympathize with the goat so I wanted the reader to sympathize with him and his struggle to survive instead. Nature does not have a good and a bad side, and I wanted to give that perspective to this story.
Hi Christian!
ReplyDeleteThe idea of telling this story through the Wolf's perspective was great and it definitely made me sympathize with Wolf! In the future, you could consider differentiating between the characters' thoughts and the narration by italicizing or adding quotation marks. Like this sentence: "Goats are generally an easy prey, but together it will be hard to target just one." I think you also did a good job making this a prequel because it transitions seamlessly into the original story. Look forward to reading more of your work!
Hi Christian!
ReplyDeleteYour story was a good read. Keeping the original story but retelling it from the wolf’s perspective was a creative idea. I am curious as to why the wolf was kicked out of the pack. I did find myself to sympathize with the wolf, and I really wanted the wolf to get his meal. The part about the mutant wolves was a good addition because it made the story more suspenseful.
Hi Christian, good story! Adding this prequel from the wolf's point of view was a nice spin, and I liked how you took the dogs and labeled them from the wolf's view too. It's interesting to see them referred to as mutated wolves since dogs are the same species but further evolved and domesticated. Seeing how the wolf was hungry after being kicked out from his pack made it easier to empathize with him during the read.
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